last week we went on camp to Woodend we did tons of cool activities like a water slide we did on the first day we were there i got to the end 3 times on the way to Woodend Spring field to have lunch and have some fresh air

this week we did art about Matariki we did a place that we think is special to us, and then we put the stars in the sky I did my about  my house with my dog  and my basketball hoop next to me and my house next to me and the 9 stars in the back round

for the past month, I have been doing a story about unseen depths I really liked doing it, and here is my whole story about it

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A deep dark place where no one has been.

There are mysterious creatures that people have been killed by and ripped to shreds. If they go down, there are giant creatures in a place called Atlantis where Poseidon lives and is the ruler of the sea. If any people come here they will be tortured by the guards because there is a portal that leads to another place… but first, you have to go through infested waters by fierce strong sharks that will rip you to shreds.

Then you have to go through guards,  a thousand of them with guns and swords that could easily kill you. You have to pass the royal guards who have way better guns to kill you. If you get through all of these you have to get past Poseidon the ruler of the sea. When you get through, there is a portal where you go to a new world. In the new world, there is peace for now.  

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I crept into the portal when I got through the portal there were tons of houses and people around me for some reason I felt a shiver in my bones I had big shiver Actually

The biggest shiver I had in my life. I saw people screaming. I saw people crying and running there were people coming down from the sky shooting there was a war the guards were coming out trying to shoot the people who were trying to take over the place. they helped me get into the truck and get away fast I heard people screaming in fear calling people to come and get them fast. I heard gunshots in the back of the truck. I heard the wheel down as the comrade said were going down!!

When I got out of the car I was scratched badly it was a big cut I looked around to see if there were any people around.

I saw this person stuck under some rubble I tried and I did it.

Thank you so much for saving me that’s all right but we need to get out of here fast I know where the base is but I need to find the map can you help me please he said we looked for Hours and then we finally found it under the truck we were so happy but it is a bit Luky that we could get into it but this means  we have to stay here the night we found some cotton

From the car. we were very thirsty we had only a small amount of water left we lit a fire to keep warm for the night 

Then we wrapped up and went to sleep the next morning I could still hear the gunshots. I knew he was all ready to and packed up everything I was the person who showed where to go then we went off on a journey to get to the base first we passed the city full of broken guns and abatement cars with the gun holes in the cars then we went passed an awa and got some water from it we were charged up ready to go 

Then we went up this tall mountain full  of wild animals wild cats and spiders big ones I got a bit scared when I came across some in this tunnel it was dark and we could not see 

Is there anything in there at the end of the tunnel we saw a big valley down people were fighting so we kept walking we scraped the idea of going to the Military base 

It was so broken down so we kept walking and walking and walking intel we got to this place it was a little town we went into the shop was there the man looked pretty excited to see some people in his shop Hello hello said the man hi I said do you need help with anything yes we are fine I was staving 

So much I and my friend got a very cheesy sausage it was very good we left the shop to cheap going and I got to tell you something we did not want this but it is ok. We ceased on going and going and going in til we got to this village named Kainga we looked around and saw all these cows and farms sheep chickens horses and even pigs this was way more populated with people and wildlife I saw cars on the streets and even buses me and my friend hoped on the bus it was warm food that you could not get sick of I had Macaroni cheese and my friend had pork ribs me and him loved 

The food we had 12 people on the bus including the bus driver. When we got off the bus to go back to the journey a couple of Hours later we were still walking in the dark my friend said there would be one more day before we got to safety the next day we got up early in the morning because we wanted to get there fast as we can we walked up the top of this mountain to get a better view we saw this giant city and that where we were going we went down the mountain and we found this road so we followed it we were in the city him and I were so happy I looked like people were waiting for us at last were finished our journey we were so happy and tired but it was worth it then I said good-bye to my friend and he said goodbye to me. 

1 year later 

I am thinking about going back I thought to myself yes so then I went back I was more advanced I backed up all of my stuff hopped into my Toyota and left the city on the big  adventure again a couple of hours later I got to the dead end were I found the road was I saw the city time to go to sleep I said I sat down I looked at my diary a year ago there were photos in the morning I got up  ready to go I did a bit of off-roading I saw the shop were we got the cheesy sausage

I parked the car next to the shop and left and got some food so that I did not get hungry then I went past the rivers and creeks and finally I got to the creek. That I saw after I went away from the city I kept on walking then I saw the city in the distance. I got happy because I saw the city I could lie down on the ground and have a rest today was a big I said to myself it was going to be a bigger day tomorrow in the morning I was ready I even had breakfast and breakfast legs it was yummy as. I got my scuba gear ready to go underwater i started walking I saw the portal but it was guards i sneaked around the guards very quietly so then they did not see me. I ran as fast as I could I jumped through the portal just in time before the guards noticed I forgot that I was long in tall I was safe I still needed to get past the big waves and the strong sharks i said to myself quietly sneaked past Poseidon in his throne than I had to sneak past the royal guards I forgot hare strong they are they had strong sharp the swords are. they spotted me and I ran for my life I just got out in time before they shot me but then I was surrounded by guards but then I heard this it sounded like an alarm clock and then I heard this sound like my mum she started saying get up time for school she said I open my eyes I saw my mum are you tired she said no I said I just had a big dream going under the water being in a war sneaking past the ruler of the sea and having a good time with my friend having food that was a big dream see you after school she said good-by mum good by.

1. On Tuesday morning we went to Graymofe to go to Pounamu Pathways. Pounamu Pathways tells you about Maori culture and all the battles that happened on the South Island when we got there we got these worksheets with questions on them when we got inside it was way warmer than outside .in there we saw this person his name was Tuterakiwhanoa he was the person who made Greymouth with his thighs then we looked around the place to find the stuff in the book there was a room that talked about all the battles there was one in the mahinapua lake one chef carried 2 of them in his hands and one in his mouth. then we went to the park to eat lunch then we went back to school